So, they talk on a chat room. Have the most boring cyber sex ever, pretend they're in a plagiarized damn near rotoscoped Final Fantasy 8 https://youtu.be/OlfH3r780So . More borrowed scenes from ff8. Then they realize they'll never meet because the cyber sex wasn't THAT good.

I just don't see any originality here. Maybe even the plot is plagiarized from somewhere.

I think I have a legit critique. Very little of this actually came from a place of actual original work.

Uhhh... I'm sure I can see her Vagina.

Freakin' awesome work